Returning to the Other World with My Children

The story looks promising i didn’t notice big writing problems but i also didn’t look for them the story i realy found new and i am interested in what the author will do with this story

desis zulfha masih binggung.

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" You are so not having a say in that. I will be personally handling your attire from head to toe for the prom, and if you try to escape, i will tell uncle and auntie about you skipping extra curriculum classes for 1 week." Naomi threatened.

<p>Nick laughed at Neon reaction and said: "Well, to be honest, you didn't. I had to call in a favor a big shot from the capital owed me."</p>

Inteligência : 34

I've always loved apocalyptic-zombie novels like this one. The story flow is great, and the characters are also good. Though sometimes, you just want to push the MC so hard that she would see how good her space was because at this point, she hadn't realize it herself; especially that spring. But I am anticipating this realization on further chapters. Uh, and her eating those animals (which was vividly described) was really... how should I put it... I was thankful I wasn't eating while reading this. Hahaha~

Ning Rong Rong :"Ning Rong Rong level 26 support spirit master, spirit essence seven treasured glass tower."